Make-up tests for the final natural beauty look

I have a clear image of what kind of make-up I want to do for the final shoot and I hope that it will turn out well, because these pictures I took of me don't encourage me much. I think that I don't like them that much because they don't really stick to the brief, because of the smudged smokey eye. But if I'll remove it then maybe it will look better but still not incomplete. I tried to do freckles with a darker foundation but I don't know why, on me just look like pimples. I hope that on my model (Lauren) won't look the same... anyway, I think it's all about the lighting. So, proper lighting, proper images. Even a not so good make-up looks fab when professional pictures are taken of it.